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Fallen From Grace

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Pinned against a wall
You tore my wings off.
       Don’t let me die here…
My black angel
My desire.
   I’m living this lie…
And you’re relishing in it.
Like the child crying in the corner
The killer so carefully anthraxes
You’re a villain.
My wings lay hopeless and forgotten
Shriveling in the light of your eyes
Pick me up
You shoved me down.
Again and again.
I can’t feel the pain anymore
And without my wings I’m powerless to you
My halo has slipped down now
And it’s choking the misery out of my pale blue eyes
Bloody tears come flooding down my face
          I know who you are…
Stomped and crushed,
You took my life and made an end.
Cruel intentions and cold hearted feelings
I’m the fool in this.
You can’t feel me here
In your arms;
I’m weeping for our lost love
...Your lost love.
The scars that have ridden on my conscience are erasing your face
You’re fading out now
Like a movie that has just ended.
I’m turning off the projector
And picking up my shriveled wings
Go to bed, just to dream of you.
Oh, I’m a fool, villain.
I fell from heaven for your touch
Descended into hell
But unlike Christ, I never arose.
I wrote this as a play-off of another poet on here. And the poem can be found here: [link]

But uh, yeah.

Comments appreciated as well as criticism! :heart:

This is a little different than my more recent writing, digging deep here, people.
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OnyxRayneInMyVein's avatar
Awsome job on this one i loved everything about it